It’s time for the third annual Valentiny writing contest from Susanna Leonard Hill! The rules are to write a Valentine’s story appropriate for children (children here defined as ages 12 and under) maximum 214 words in which someone is hopeful. See the contest here. Thanks Susanna for putting on such great contests to inspire us writers to get to work! 🙂 Here is my entry:
My Valentine’s Day Wish
Valentines are meant to say
“I Love You” on one single day.
But, that is not the only way
to show somebody love.
Love can’t be given by what’s bought.
It’s something learned. It’s something taught.
Much more than just one day of thought –
there’s always time for love.
So, here’s my wish: that we can find
a way to love, and to be kind.
It can be written, spoken, signed –
all different forms of love!
My hope is brown loves white loves green,
and every color in between,
no matter who or what is seen,
‘cause everyone needs love.
This year instead of cards and treats,
and just one day of heart-shaped sweets,
let’s all get up out of our seats
and SHOW each-other love.
If someone’s lonely, take their hand.
If they are crying, understand.
A kid who’s bullied? Take a stand!
Our actions show we love.
It cannot be that hard to see
a world that loves all equally
that sees the good in you and me.
We ALL deserve some love.
Some say that I’m a dreamer. True.
But I KNOW it’s inside of you.
I’m hopeful that it CAN come true –
this whole year full of love!
Kristen, this is beautiful and well written. Love the rhyme scheme. You’ve written a beautiful poem. This would make a lovely PB, along the lines of I WISH YOU MORE. Best of Luck with this (now, and in the future).
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Thank you Maria!!! 🙂
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Lovely heart and rhyme. I’m keeping the thought of an encompassing love in my heart for 2018. Good luck Kristen!
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Thank you!! And that’s for sure the best valentine you can give anyone 🙂
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Very well done! I wish you well with it.
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Thank you!!
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As The Beatles said, “Love is all you need.” Good luck!
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That’s right!! 🙂 Thank you!
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There’s always room for love, and I love your poem. Very well done!
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Thank you!!
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Yes, I agree with Maria. This expansive poem about sharing love is so important. Well done!
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Thank you!! I appreciate you taking the time to read it 🙂
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Love it! Good luck!
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Great poem!
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Can definitely see this as a picture book–well done in so many ways!
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Hi Kristen – oh so true … and what a great way to remind us all there’s so many ways to love, as well as to remember it’s all year round … great poem and story line – cheers Hilary
http://positiveletters.blogspot.ca/2018/02/the-robin-who-hedges-her-choices.html
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My thoughts on Valentine’s Day exactly, Kristen! Such a lovely, timely, and important message and yes, very hopeful! Thanks so much for a wonderful entry!
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